Its getting hot in here, so take off all your clothes

okay.
i just got back from camp 2 days ago.
and it was fuuuunnnn!!!
probably the best camp I've ever been to.ahha
and who was part of the organising commitee???
none other than KOH HUEY YEE.
see.you didn't get enough credit so I give you credit right here right now in my blog.
i'm such a good sis.haha
got lots of pics in facebook.go and check it out!and you'll notice a difference in my page...........I finally have a display picture!! Great leap of improvement huh.hahahaa
hmmmm
i have nothing to write now.so might as well let you have a glimpse(actually its the full essay)of my first essay written in Singapore for the Bridging course.I got 17 out of 30.lol
PS:we were only required to write the isi-which are 3 pargraphs.
here it goes people!

The Effects of Volcano Eruption.

It all started out with a crack in the crater. As harmless as it sounds, a volcano eruption could result in unimaginable adverse effects to life and its surroundings encompassing an area up to 200 square miles. The after effects of the eruption would transform its landscape so drastically that it would make it impossible to recognise. Plants and animals-some already at the brink of extinction-were withered and scorched to death by the sweltering heat, no doubt causing imbalance to the delicate equilibrium of the eco system. Due to the deadly burning magma now running through the rivers, villages and cities nearby have lost their main source of water. Livestock and vegetation at the foothills weren’t spared and were completely obliterated, consumed by the sizzling larvae. In just a few measly minutes, there was not a trace of life left that surrounded that charcoaled lump of mountain.

The catastrophe has also brought a major effect on the country’s already frail economical status and suffered a staggering blow. The soaring statistics of unemployment is a reliable projection of how massive and severe the losses are in the country that was triggered by the eruption. On the other hand, thousand were subjected to suffer in abject poverty while the politicians engage themselves in their inside arguments, trying to find a solution to curb the damage done and put an end to this turmoil. The rippling effect lead to confusion and fear which soon appeared on the citizens’ panic-stricken face as they were deeply troubled by pilling bills and increasing debts such as utility bills and rental payments.

Finally, the immense eruption has destroyed many houses and buildings, causing them to crumble and crush the lives within them, therefore, snatching away countless of innocent lives. Hundreds were also reportedly missing, with many still buried deep under the rubble and pieces of debris, awaiting the aid of the rescue team. As the bodies of loved ones were uncovered, tears were shed and the atmosphere was filled with grief and despair. Who would have thought that such demise of fate would be bestowed upon the ones they loved and cherished? Despite the tight bind and unwillingness to part, the affected citizens were told to be evacuated to a safer zone to escape any after effects. The sight of grey ashes and hazardous particles contaminating the air and tinting the sky with a dark, solid grey, ignited the adopting of protective measures whereby sanitary masks are distributed to the victims in order the prevent them from inhaling the intoxicated air which is detrimental to one’s health.


TADAAAAA!haha.bet you didn't read all.cause I won't if i were you.lol
Lastly, I apologise if my eng is too poor and if there were any grammatical errors from the passage above.
bye bye!